2016屆高考英語二輪短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)突破：短文改錯(cuò)集訓(xùn)(15)

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1、 【專項(xiàng)突破】 2016 高考英語 - 短文改錯(cuò)集訓(xùn)（十五） 【專項(xiàng)突破】短文改錯(cuò) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共 有 10 處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（ ）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意： 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2．只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。 Passage 1 O

2、n a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some v

3、illagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out of the bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for their help. Passage 2 A foreign

4、student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasnt even giving the chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. "We dont employ dishon

5、est people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he arrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds: honesty is th

6、e best policy. Passage 3 One year ago,I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats. Gathering at the entrance of the station, w

7、e told to collect as many English words and sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst into the cheers as

8、 if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease. Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go. Passage 4 Dear Mandy ， Pm not doing well in my lessons at school ，

9、 especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy ， but its not true. I work really hard ， often study late into the night ！ Ive tried to talk to my mother ， but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does. My brother doe

10、snt study very hard ， and he always gets excellent grades. Its not fair ！ The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student shes had for year. When I told my dad ， all he said was， “ You mustnt waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on your lessons！ ” Pm feeling quite

11、 puzzling what to do now． Would you please help me out? Thanks a lot！ Yours sincerely， Lisa Passage 5 There ’ans old man in our village calling Old Joe who said to be 110 years old. This can ’bet proved though he doesn ’ t have a birth certificate. All his personal papers were d

12、estroy during the World War II. I don ’ t know if he really is so old, and it doesn ’ t matter. He certainly looks very o course, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life. Old Joe always answered them like this, “ If you arecigarofferedtte, never acce

13、pt it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them. Passage 6 Dear Jin Jing， Your problem is common one among middle school students ．Maybe the following advices can help you ．First in all, believe in yourself ．Y

14、our greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence ．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates ． One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words ．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him ．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or

15、who share the same interest as you ． You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies ． Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her ． Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly ． Yours, Li

16、ly 2016 高考英語 - 短文改錯(cuò)集訓(xùn)（十五）答案 Passage 1 On a snowy winter night , a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the passengers of wet road .And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out trapped was of gas and it was very cold in it

17、. They could do nothing but to wait for help . A man who lived nearby saw that had happened . He and some villagers succeeded in open the what opening door and helped all of them out of the bus .He took them to his home but offered food and and water and even some warm clothes to th

18、e children . They spent two days in their his home and finally help came . All of them were thankfully for their help. thankful Passage 2 A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to fine find a good job and have a bright futur

19、e. But in his disappointment, he wasnt even giving the to given chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how . "We why dont employ dishonest people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he was after arrived in Germany,

20、 he found ∧ easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and it So was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds : honesty is the best policy. mind Passage 3 One year ago, I had a sp

21、ecial English lesson hold at Shijiazhuang Railway Station. It was quite different held from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats. with and Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as man

22、y English words and were sentences as possiblehere. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked there everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the searching came class would burst into the cheers as if

23、we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease. vivid Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go. wherever Passage 4 Dear Mandy, I ’ m not doing well

24、 in my lessons at school,especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard especially because he wants me ∧ go to university. He thinks I ’ m lazy, but it ’ s not true. I work really hard, to often study late into the night! I ’ ve tried to talk to mybutmother,shealways said I have to work

25、studying says as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn ’ t study veryand hard,healways gets excellent as but grades. It ’ s not fair! The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says I ’ m the bestyearstudent.Whenshe years I told my dad, all he said was, “ You mustnyour

26、time’ tinwasteart.You must focus your mind on on / over your lessons! ” I ’ m feelingpuzzlingquite what to do now. Would you please help me out? Thanks  ’ s had for puzzled a lot! Yours sincerely, Lisa Passage 5 試題分析：題目主要考查學(xué)生對冠詞、名詞、并列連詞、形容詞、過去分詞、定語從句、狀

27、 語從句、時(shí)態(tài) 等語法知識(shí)的掌握情況。 【小題 51 】考查過去分詞作定語。 man 和 call 之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，即一個(gè)被叫做 ......的人，應(yīng)該 用過去分詞作定語，故把 calling 改為 called。 【小題 52 】考查定語從句。 who 引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語從句， sb be said to be/do sth 據(jù)說某人 ......，根 據(jù) “There’s an old man可知”短文用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故在 who 和 said 之間加 is。 【小題 53】考查狀語從句。句意：這得不到證明，因?yàn)樗麤]

28、有出生證明。前后是因果關(guān)系， 故把 though 改為 because。 【小題 54 】考查被動(dòng)語態(tài)。 papers 和 destroy 是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，即文件被毀壞，故用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，故 把 destroy 改為 destroyed。 【小題 55 】考查冠詞。 World War II 二戰(zhàn)，是專有名詞，前面不需要冠詞，故把 the 去掉。 【小題 56】考查并列連詞。句意：我不知道他是不是真的有那么大年紀(jì)了，但這無關(guān)緊要。 前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把 and 改為 but 。 【小題 57】考查名詞。經(jīng)常有人問他問題， questi

29、on 問題，是可數(shù)名詞，被問過的問題不止 一個(gè)，應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把 question 改為 questions 。 【小題 58 】考查時(shí)態(tài)。 always 與一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)連用， 且根據(jù) “There’s an old man...I don ’t know...he is often...who want to... 可知，短”文使用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故把 answered 改為 answers。 【小題 59 】考查物主代詞。 根據(jù) “if you are annoyed...可知，”這里說的是 “你 ”，即第二人稱 you， 應(yīng)該用形容詞性

30、物主代詞 your ，故把 his 改為 your 。 【小題 60】考查形容詞作定語。副詞修飾動(dòng)詞、形容詞或句子；形容詞作定語修飾名詞，這 里修飾名詞 questions ，應(yīng)該用形容詞，故把 foolishly 改為 foolish 。 考點(diǎn)：考查冠詞；名詞；并列連詞；形容詞；過去分詞；定語從句；狀語從句；時(shí)態(tài) Passage 6 1.is 后加  a  2.advices 改為  advice  3.first in  改為  first of  4.去掉  it 5.loud  改為  louder  6.him  改為  them  7.trying  改為  try  8.share 改為  shares 9.Unless 改為  If  10.possibly  改為  possible