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第五部分書面表達(dá)專題二十一書面表達(dá),中考英語(yǔ)(浙江專用),Writing1(2018杭州)假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住濱海市人民路1號(hào)。你在美國(guó)旅行期間不慎遺失錢包,曾向賓館詢問(wèn)。以下是賓館的答復(fù)郵件,請(qǐng)你閱讀后進(jìn)行回復(fù),詞數(shù)80左右。,A組2014—2018年浙江中考題組,五年中考,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]1.本文是應(yīng)用文。2.寫作時(shí)應(yīng)使用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.寫作中應(yīng)包含何時(shí)入住賓館、所住房間和對(duì)失物的描述及里面的物品,并附上地址和電話號(hào)碼。[參考范文]DearMr.Smith,Thankyousomuchforyourreply.IstayedinyourhotelonJuly6,inRoom106,andIrememberhavingleftmynewblackwalletonthetable.MyIDcard,twocreditcards,anda100-dollarbill,areinmywallet.WouldyoubekindenoughtosendmethewallettoNo.1RenminRoad,Binhai,Chinabymailifyoufindit?Pleasecallmeatmyphonenumber1361234567ifneeded.Thanksagain.Yours,,LiPing精彩語(yǔ)句1.精美詞匯rememberdoing記得做過(guò)……2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)WouldyoubekindenoughtosendmethewallettoNo.1RenminRoad,Binhai,China...?(拜托您……),注意:文中若出現(xiàn)“Jack”以外的人名或任何學(xué)校名稱,該作文得分不超過(guò)12分。WeekendorNot?,Writing2(2018溫州)如今,國(guó)內(nèi)外很多孩子在父母的安排下沒有了自己的周末,如下圖中的Jack。請(qǐng)分析圖中的這種現(xiàn)象并談?wù)勀愕目捶?以WeekendorNot?為題寫一篇約110詞的英語(yǔ)短文向Parents雜志投稿,讓父母?jìng)兺ㄟ^(guò)閱讀你的文章能有所啟發(fā)。,答案[寫作提示]1.本文是看圖作文。2.寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以第三人稱為主,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。3.寫作中應(yīng)先描述Jack周末的基本情況,而后分析現(xiàn)象,談?wù)撟约旱目捶?。[參考范文]WeekendorNot?Jackhastoattendlotsofclassesatweekends.Hehaslittletimeforhisfavoritesport—soccer.Still,hisparentsarepushinghimtodomoremathexercises,whichworrieshimalot.Nowadays,manystudentsareundermuchpressurelikeJack.Theirparentsbelieveitnecessaryforthemtomakefulluseoftheweekendsandlearnasmuchaspossible.Asaresult,somestudentsarestressedoutandthereforeloseinterestinlearninganything.Whatisworse,theymaynotbeabletolearntomanagetheirownlife.,Idohopeallthechildrencanhavethefreedomtochoosewhattheyliketodoandenjoytheirweekends.精彩語(yǔ)句1.精美詞匯makefulluseof充分利用asaresult結(jié)果是bestressedout緊張,飽受壓力atweekends在周末2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)Still,hisparentsarepushinghimtodomoremathexercises,whichworrieshimalot.(使用定語(yǔ)從句)Theirparentsbelieveitnecessaryforthemtomakefulluseoftheweekendsandlearnasmuchaspossible.(it是形式賓語(yǔ),真正的賓語(yǔ)是動(dòng)詞不定式短語(yǔ))Whatisworse,theymaynotbeabletolearntomanagetheirownlife.(連接詞的使用),Writing3(2018寧波)今年5月11日,你校組織了一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng),部分學(xué)生選擇去了紅星農(nóng)場(chǎng)(見導(dǎo)圖一),其余學(xué)生選擇去了科技博物館(見導(dǎo)圖二)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你所選擇的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)寫一篇英語(yǔ)日記,記錄當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷和感受。注意:(1)日記必須包括你所選擇導(dǎo)圖的所有要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名;(3)詞數(shù):80~100。日記格式及首句已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Friday,May11th,TodayIhadaschooltrip.,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]1.本文是應(yīng)用文。2.寫作時(shí)應(yīng)使用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。3.寫作中應(yīng)按照導(dǎo)圖介紹人物、出行方式、活動(dòng),并補(bǔ)充自己對(duì)活動(dòng)的感受,合理拓展。[參考范文1]Friday,May11thTodayIhadaschooltrip.Theweatherwasfine.MyclassmatesandIsetofftoHongxingFarmbybusearlyinthemorning.Theminutewearrived,wetookawalkaroundthefarm.Thenwefedthechickens.WhenIthrewsomefoodtothem,theyranovertomewithexcitementandsomeofthemevenwalkedintotheirfriends.Themostexcitingthingwasthatwepickedstrawberriesafterlunch.Whilewewerepick-ing,weatealot.Howsweettheywere!Ihadawonderfultimetoday!Idohopetogothereagaininthenearfuture!,[參考范文2]Friday,May11thTodayIhadaschooltrip.Theweatherwasfine.MyclassmatesandIsetofftotheScienceMuse-umbysubwayat7:00.Assoonaswereachedthemuseum,wewereamazedtoseelotsofpicturesaboutscience.Thenwewatchedavideoaboutdifferentinventionsandtheirinventors.It??sunbelievablethattechnologyhasprogressedinsucharapidway.Intheafternoon,weplayedchesswithsomespecialrobots.Itwassurprisingtofindthatnobodycouldbeatthem.Beforeleaving,weboughtsomegiftsforourfriends.Ihadawonderfultimetoday!Idohopetogothereagain!精彩語(yǔ)句1.精美詞匯setoff出發(fā)withexcitement興奮地,beamazedtodo驚訝地做……insucharapidway以如此快速的方式assoonas一……就……2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)It??sunbelievablethattechnologyhasprogressedinsucharapidway.Theminutewearrived,wetookawalkaroundthefarm.(theminute一……就……)Howsweettheywere!(感嘆句的使用),Writing4(2018金華)在即將舉行的中學(xué)生國(guó)際文化交流活動(dòng)中,你將代表學(xué)校介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日,請(qǐng)你從所給的卡片中任選一張,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿,介紹該節(jié)日。,注意:1.發(fā)言稿中必須包含卡片上的信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息;3.詞數(shù)80~100;4.文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometotheChineseculturetour.That??sall.Thanksforlistening.,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]1.本文是應(yīng)用文。2.寫作時(shí)應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.寫作中注意包含時(shí)間、活動(dòng)、意義,在列提綱時(shí)注意把必要的活動(dòng)和意義補(bǔ)充完整。[參考范文1]Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometotheChineseculturetour.NowallowmetointroduceoneoftheChinesetraditionalfestivals,theSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivalfallsinJanuaryorFebruary.ItisChineseNewYearandalsothebiggestdayofyear.Sopeoplecomebackhomefromdifferentplacesandgettogetherforabigdinner.Manypeoplestayuplatetowelcomethenewyear,hopingtheywillhaveabrightnewstart.Duringthefestival,peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriendsandwisheachothergoodluckforthenewyear.Childrencanoftengethongbaofromtheirelders.Doyouthinkitinteresting?,That??sall.Thanksforlistening.[參考范文2]Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometotheChineseculturetour.NowallowmetointroduceoneoftheChinesetraditionalfestivals,theMid-AutumnFestival.TheMid-AutumnFestivalusuallyfallsinSeptemberorOctoberwhenthemoonappearsthebiggestandthebrightestintheyear.Duringthefestival,Chinesepeoplesitaroundthetablewiththeirfamilymembersandenjoymooncakesaswellasthebeautifulmoon.Peoplebelievethattheroundmooncakesandafullmoonaresymbolsofbeingtogether.Whenseeingthem,peoplewillmisstheirfamilymembersfaraway.Atthesametime,theywillexpresswishesandhopesforthem.Doesitsoundinteresting?That??sall.Thanksforlistening.,精彩語(yǔ)句1.精美詞匯allowsb.todosth.允許某人做某事fallinJanuaryorFebruary恰巧在一月或者二月theirelders他們的長(zhǎng)輩haveabrightnewstart擁有一個(gè)全新的開始aswellas也,又2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)TheMid-AutumnFestivalusuallyfallsinSeptemberorOctober.Manypeoplestayuplatetowelcomethenewyear,hopingtheywillhaveabrightnewstart.(現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ))Atthesametime,theywillexpresswishesandhopesforthem.,Writing5(2017杭州),答案[寫作提示]1.本文時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.文章應(yīng)對(duì)來(lái)信的兩個(gè)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行答復(fù),一是tablemanners,二是推薦杭州的景點(diǎn)。[參考范文]HiArmino,Gladtohearfromyouagain.Asyoumentionedinyouremail,thereareindeedsometablemannersinChina.Forexample,wearenotsupposedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.Andit??simpolitetopointatanyonewithchopsticks.Asforplacesofinterest,IsuggestyougototheHangzhouNationalTeaMuseum,whereyoucouldwatchteaartperformancesanddrinktea.I??mlookingforwardtoseeingyou!LiPing,精美語(yǔ)句1.精美詞匯besupposedtodosth.應(yīng)該做某事;hearfrom收到……的信2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)Asyoumentionedinyouremail...(as引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句)It??simpolitetodo...(“itis+形容詞+不定式短語(yǔ)”句型)Writing6(2017溫州)假如你是李華,就讀于WenzhouTangheMiddleSchool。你想去美國(guó)的WashingtonInternationalSchool(WIS)讀高中?，F(xiàn)在你需要給對(duì)方學(xué)校寫一封簡(jiǎn)明扼要、有說(shuō)服力的自薦信,爭(zhēng)取讓學(xué)校錄取你。參考要點(diǎn):?個(gè)人信息?學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)?愛好、能力?……,要求:(1)不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人身份信息;(2)詞數(shù):110左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,Iamlookingforwardtoyourkindreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua,答案[寫作提示]1.本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),要寫清楚個(gè)人信息。2.介紹自己喜愛的學(xué)科及成績(jī)。3.寫出自己的愛好和能力。[參考范文]DearSir/Madam,IamLiHuafromWenzhouTangheMiddleSchool.IwishtogetanopportunitytostudyatWIS.Likemanyotherboys,Ienjoydoingsports,butmathsandsciencearemyfavourite.IlikeChinese,Englishandmusicaswell.Ihavewonseveralprizesinvariouscompetitions,includingasecondprizeinaninternationalmathscompetition.Ihavejoinedinthreeone-month-tour-studyprogramsintheUS,learntalotaboutAmericancul-tureandmademanyfriendsthere.SoWISismyfirstchoicetostudyabroad.AlthoughIamnotthebestnow,IwillmakeeveryefforttobecomeatopstudentandIbelieveyou,willbeproudofme.Iamlookingforwardtoyourkindreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua精美語(yǔ)句1.精美詞匯makeeveryeffort盡最大的努力2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)IwishtogetanopportunitytostudyatWIS.(動(dòng)詞不定式作定語(yǔ)是英語(yǔ)表達(dá)中的一種特色)enjoydoing喜歡做……,Writing7(2017寧波)三年的初中生活讓你收獲滿滿。校英語(yǔ)報(bào)邀你寫一篇短文,給即將升入九年級(jí)的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹或他們的父母提一些建議。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷選擇其中一個(gè)對(duì)象,闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。,注意:(1)短文必須包括你所選擇一方的所有要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名;(3)詞數(shù):80—100;(4)短文首句僅供參考,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文首句:Howtimeflies!Now(you/yourchildren)arestudentsofGrade9.,答案[寫作提示]1.本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。2.覆蓋答題要點(diǎn)。3.行為連貫,連接詞使用恰當(dāng),指代清晰。[參考范文]Possibleversion1:Howtimeflies!NowyouarestudentsofGrade9.HereI??dliketotellyousomethingthatwillmakeyourschoollifemorecomfortableandwonderful.Firstofall,itisimportantforyoutokeephealthy,sodon??tforgettoexerciseeveryday.Second,you??dbetterjoinclubssothatyoucanlearnbetterandmakemorefriends.Third,youwillbeabletomakegreatprogressifyoudevelopyourstudyskills.Besides,therearemanywaysforyoutoloweryourstress,suchaslisteningtomusic,hangingoutwithfriends,andwatchingmovies.Ihopeyouwillenjoyyourschoollifeandachieveyourdreams.,Possibleversion2:Howtimeflies!NowyourchildrenarestudentsofGrade9.HereI??dliketotellyousomethingthatwillmaketheirschoollifemorewonderful.Firstofall,itisimportanttoencourageyourchildrenmoresothattheywillbemoreconfident.Second,pleasedonotcompareyourchildrenwithothers,becauseifyoupushthemtoohard,theywillfeelstressedout.Third,thechildrenshouldbeallowedtomaketheirowndecisions.Thereisnoneedtogeteverythingreadyforthem.Besides,beingagoodlistenerwillhelpyougetalongwellwithyourchildren.Ihopeyourchildren??sdreamswillcometruewithyourhelp.深度解析題目大膽創(chuàng)新,突出兩個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞:“自主選擇”、“自由發(fā)揮”,使不同層次的學(xué)生都能表達(dá)自己的真實(shí)感受,讓不同層次的學(xué)生都有發(fā)揮的空間。,精美語(yǔ)句1.精美詞匯forgettodosth.忘記做某事makegreatprogress取得巨大的進(jìn)步compare...with...把……和……做比較makeone??sowndecision做好自己的決定2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)Besides,therearemanywaysforyoutoloweryourstress,suchaslisteningtomusic,hangingoutwithfriends,andwatchingmovies.而且,有很多減輕你壓力的方式,比如聽音樂(lè)、和朋友閑逛、看電影。,注意:(1)短文可結(jié)合圖片信息或自身經(jīng)歷,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名;(3)詞數(shù):80—100,短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文首句:Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutthetopic“Tochangeornot”.,Writing8(2017湖州)英語(yǔ)課上,老師組織大家就以下兩幅圖進(jìn)行“Tochangeornot”的話題討論,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)闡述你對(duì)此話題的看法。,,答案[寫作提示]1.本文要恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),對(duì)一般事實(shí)的論述用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),而對(duì)自己的經(jīng)歷要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。2.書寫規(guī)范整潔。3.用詞恰當(dāng),句型變化多樣。[參考范文]Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutthetopic“Tochangeornot”.Ithinkdifferentpeoplehavedifferentchoicestodealwithproblems.Forexample,whenmeetingwiththeweightproblem,somepeopledecidetotakeexercisetoloseweightwhileothersthinktheycan??tdoanythingaboutit.WhenIwasinGrade7,IhaddifficultywithmyspokenEnglish.Insteadofgivingup,Ichosetochange.Itriedmybesttolistentotapesandpracticespeakingeveryday.Nowmypronunciationhasbeenimprovedalot.Inaword,facingproblems,weshouldtakeactionstochange.Surelyitwillmakeagreatdiffer-,ence.深度解析本文是一篇夾敘夾議的文章。語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用中要注意時(shí)態(tài)的結(jié)構(gòu)和形式,特別要避免be動(dòng)詞與實(shí)義動(dòng)詞的混淆。在寫作前,請(qǐng)務(wù)必將答題要點(diǎn)歸納為提綱,這樣就不會(huì)遺漏要點(diǎn)了。精美語(yǔ)句1.精美詞匯dealwith處理loseweight減重tryone??sbesttodosth.盡某人最大的努力去做某事2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)WhenIwasinGrade7,IhaddifficultywithmyspokenEnglish.當(dāng)我在七年級(jí)的時(shí)候,我的口語(yǔ)有很大困難。,Writing9(2016杭州)請(qǐng)查看你校英語(yǔ)節(jié)安排表(Schedule),給外教老師Dave寫一封80詞左右的電子郵件,告知他調(diào)整的內(nèi)容并給出你認(rèn)為恰當(dāng)?shù)睦碛伞?,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]1.英語(yǔ)節(jié)調(diào)整的內(nèi)容有兩個(gè):①EnglishTalkShow的時(shí)間;②EnglishCorner的地點(diǎn)。2.恰當(dāng)?shù)睦碛伞?.對(duì)調(diào)整表示道歉,并邀請(qǐng)外教參加。[參考范文]HiDave,I??msorrytoinformyouthattherearetwochangestothescheduleforEnglishDay.First,therewillbeaveryimportantmeetingafterlunchinourschool,soEnglishTalkShowwillbeputoffby30minutes.Thatis,itstartsat13:00andendsat14:30.Second,theplaceofEnglishCornerwillbechangedfromPlaygroundtoSchoolHallbecausetheweatherreportsaysit??sgoingtorainthatafternoon.Pleasecomeandjoinusontime.LiPing,精彩語(yǔ)句I??msorrytoinformyouthat...我很遺憾地通知您……First第一Second第二Writing10(2016寧波)“傳遞愛心,服務(wù)他人”是文明社會(huì)所倡導(dǎo)的理念。獅子會(huì)(theLions)就是一個(gè)以此為宗旨的國(guó)際性服務(wù)團(tuán)隊(duì)。楊敏是獅子會(huì)的一名成員,多年來(lái)她一直樂(lè)于助人。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,向?？腅nglishWorld欄目投稿,簡(jiǎn)要介紹楊敏的事跡,然后談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和打算。,要求:1.短文內(nèi)容必須包含表格所提供的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名;3.詞數(shù):80—100(短文開頭已給出,僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。短文開頭:Fromtimetotime,wearemovedbythepeopleandthingsaroundus.YangMinisoneofthepersonsIadmiremost.,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]1.本文要記敘和議論相結(jié)合,時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。2.第一段介紹YangMin助人為樂(lè)的事情。觀點(diǎn)包括:(1)她是獅子會(huì)的成員。(2)她幫助他人多年。(3)經(jīng)常去養(yǎng)老院幫忙。(4)在雨天借給他人雨傘和雨衣。3.第二段表明自己的觀點(diǎn),并表明自己的計(jì)劃。4.語(yǔ)句通順,行文流暢。[參考范文]Fromtimetotime,wearemovedbythepeopleandthingsaroundus.YangMinisoneoftheper-sonsIadmiremost.AsamemberoftheLions,shehasbeenhelpingothersformanyyears.Shegoestotheoldpeople??shometwiceamonthtocuthair,washclothesanddosomecleaningforthem.Besides,onrainydayssheofferspeopleumbrellasorraincoatsforfree.I??mdeeplymovedbyherstory.I??mgoingtostartwithsmallthingsaroundme.Iplantogivebooksandclothestochildreninpoorvillages.What??smore,I??llaskmyparentsandmorefriends,tojoinme.Smallactioncanmakeabigdifference.Let??shelpthosewhoneedhelp!精彩語(yǔ)句Asamemberof...作為……的一員bedeeplymoved被深深感動(dòng)makeadifference產(chǎn)生不同,有影響,Writing11(2016溫州)假如你是Lingling,學(xué)校根據(jù)下表中新西蘭來(lái)溫暑期交流師生的意愿,決定安排他們?nèi)?00公里外的許村游玩一天,但自行車來(lái)回路程需要8—9小時(shí),權(quán)衡利弊,需調(diào)整這項(xiàng)內(nèi)容,請(qǐng)你發(fā)郵件給對(duì)方帶隊(duì)老師Mr.Black做好說(shuō)明、溝通工作。,要求:(1)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息;(2)文本長(zhǎng)度:110詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)DearMr.Black,I??mLingling.Myschoolaskedustomaketheone-daytourplanforyouandwetriedtomakeitbesttoyourpreferences,butI??mafraidwe??llhavetomakesomechanges.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes.Lingling,答案[寫作提示]1.首先要對(duì)活動(dòng)、地點(diǎn)、用時(shí)和交通等情況進(jìn)行描述。2.其次表明自己對(duì)安排進(jìn)行了哪些調(diào)整以及調(diào)整的理由,符合邏輯。3.語(yǔ)句通順,行文流暢。[參考范文]DearMr.Black,I??mLingling.Myschoolaskedustomaketheone-daytourplanforyouandwetriedtomakeitbesttoyourpreferences,butI??mafraidwe??llhavetomakesomechanges.We??llvisitamountainvillagecalledXucun,whichisveryfamousforitsoldhouses,fantasticsightsanddeliciousfood.I??msureyouwilllikeit.However,itwilltakeusabout8to9hourstogoandcomebackbybike.Evenifwesetoutat7:00a.m.,we??llgetthereatabout11:30.Goingaroundthebeautiful,culturalplaces,includingsomeoldhousesallwithahistoryofover500years,willtakeusatleast2to3hours.Havinglunch(lo-,calfoodanddrinks)takesanotherhour.What??smore,it??sveryhothereinsummer.Sowethinktakingabustherewillbeamuchbetterchoice.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes.Lingling寫作分析本文具有讀寫結(jié)合的特點(diǎn),試題呈現(xiàn)了“一日游”的安排和需要調(diào)整的內(nèi)容,難點(diǎn)在于考生首先要讀懂表格,明確需要調(diào)整的內(nèi)容,并對(duì)調(diào)整寫出符合邏輯的理由。精彩語(yǔ)句I??msureyouwilllikeit.我確信你會(huì)喜歡的。befamousfor因……而著名what??smore而且,Writing12(2016紹興)針對(duì)大部分高中要求學(xué)生住校的現(xiàn)狀,英語(yǔ)課上同學(xué)們就“Wouldyouliketoliveinschool?”這一話題展開調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,匯報(bào)調(diào)查結(jié)果,表達(dá)你的意愿并闡述理由。,注意:1.短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);2.你的理由至少兩條;3.詞數(shù):80—100;4.短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:方便的convenient短文首句:Wouldyouliketoliveinschool?Wehadasurveyaboutitandhere??stheresult.,答案[寫作提示]1.匯報(bào)調(diào)查結(jié)果:①大部分同學(xué)愿意,原因:方便與同學(xué)交流;學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己;②一些學(xué)生不愿意,原因:在家能休息得更好;與家人相處時(shí)間更長(zhǎng)。2.表達(dá)你的意愿并闡述自己的理由。[參考范文]Wouldyouliketoliveinschool?Wehadasurveyaboutitandhere??stheresult.Moststudentsprefertoliveinschoolbecausetheyfinditconvenienttocommunicatewiththeirclassmates.Also,theycanlearnhowtolookafterthemselvesinthisway.However,somestudentsthinklivingathomeisabetterchoice.Themainreasonisthattheycanrelaxbetterathome.Besides,theycanspendmoretimewiththeirfamilymembersandgetonbet-terwiththem.Asforme,I??dliketoliveinschool.That??sbecauseIcanspendmoretimeonstudy.What??smore,it??sawonderfulexperiencetolivewithotherclassmates.,精彩語(yǔ)句preferto更喜歡besides而且Asforme...對(duì)于我來(lái)說(shuō)……,Writing13(2015杭州)根據(jù)下表用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容須包括:對(duì)下表中關(guān)于這兩個(gè)城市(CityA和CityB)的全部信息進(jìn)行比較,分析利弊,確定其中一個(gè)城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。,Inmyopinion,isthebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]1.本文屬于說(shuō)明性的文章,主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):①確定暑假旅游的目的地;②比較兩個(gè)城市的信息,分析利弊。3.參考詞匯:flying,temperature,hotel,thingstodo,food[參考范文]①Inmyopinion,CityAisthebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.Althoughthetemperaturethereishigher,thehotelislesscomfortable,andeventhefoodisnotasdeliciousasthatinCityB,IstillchooseCityA.ThemostimportantreasonisthatIcanhavealotofthingstodoinCityA.Icanenjoymorebeautifulsceneryanddomoreactivities.Besides,ittakesusonlytwohourstoflythere,whichsavesusalotoftime.Ihopetheholidaywillbeanunforgettableexperience.②Inmyopinion,CityBisthebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.Althoughittakesmetwomorehourstoflythereonanairplane,andIdon??thavemanythingstodo,IstillchooseCityB.ThemostimportantreasonisthatCityBhasbetterweather,nottoohotortoocold.Besides,thehotel,thereismorecomfortableandthefoodismoredeliciousthanthatinCityA.Allthesemakemyholidaymorerelaxing.Ihopethecomingsummerholidaywillbeanunforgettableexperience.深度解析審讀所給信息,弄清楚所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),然后對(duì)所給的信息進(jìn)行梳理,可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)調(diào)整寫作順序,使文章行文連貫。精彩語(yǔ)句Themostimportantreasonisthat...最重要的原因是……Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.花費(fèi)某人多少時(shí)間做某事。,Writing14(2015溫州)美中文化交流中心(ACCEC)暑期將組織學(xué)生來(lái)華學(xué)習(xí)、交流,現(xiàn)正在中國(guó)招募志愿者,幫助他們學(xué)習(xí)中文。假如你是揚(yáng)帆中學(xué)的學(xué)生李平,請(qǐng)按要求給該項(xiàng)目負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.Miller寫一封申請(qǐng)信。內(nèi)容包括:(1)申請(qǐng)擔(dān)任志愿者;(2)說(shuō)明自己樂(lè)于助人、擅長(zhǎng)中文;(3)談?wù)剬W(xué)好中文的方法;(4)……參考詞匯:volunteer,begoodat,improve,culture注意:(1)申請(qǐng)信需要涵蓋以上所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息;(3)詞數(shù):110詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。,DearMr.Miller,I??mLiPingfromYangfanMiddleSchool.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yourstruly,LiPing,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]1.本文屬于應(yīng)用文,主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):①申請(qǐng)擔(dān)任志愿者;②說(shuō)明自己樂(lè)于助人、擅長(zhǎng)中文;③談?wù)剬W(xué)好中文的方法。[參考范文]DearMr.Miller,I??mLiPingfromYangfanMiddleSchool.IamveryinterestedinyourprojectandwanttobethevolunteertohelpthestudentslearnChinese.Iamwarm-heartedandalwaysreadytohelpothers.IamgoodatChinese.Lastyear,IwonthefirstprizefortheChineseSpeechCompetitioninmycity.IhavemanygoodwaystolearnChinesewell.Forexample,wecanlistentotheradioandreadaloudeverymorning.AlsolearningsomeChineseclassicalsongshelpsimprovethelanguagequickly.Besides,talkingwithlocalpeopleisafunand,effectivewaytolearnChineseanditsculture.IfIcangetthejob,IbelieveIcanbeagreathelper.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yourstruly,LiPing寫作分析本題要求寫一封申請(qǐng)信,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,學(xué)生不必考慮。重點(diǎn)是根據(jù)要求把三個(gè)要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。精彩語(yǔ)句warm-hearted熱心的forexample例如,Writing15(2015紹興)你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)正在開展主題為“Whatshouldagoodteacherbelike?”的討論,為此你采訪了一些學(xué)生和家長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文進(jìn)行交流,并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。,注意:1.短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);2.你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條;3.詞數(shù):80—100;4.短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文首句:Studentsandparentshavedifferentopinionsaboutwhatagoodteachershouldbelike.Whatshouldagoodteacherbelike?,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]1.可以采用三段式作文。2.第一段寫學(xué)生的主要觀點(diǎn):(1)與學(xué)生相處融洽;(2)課堂生動(dòng)有趣。3.第二段寫家長(zhǎng)的主要觀點(diǎn):(1)學(xué)識(shí)廣博;(2)嚴(yán)格要求學(xué)生。4.你的觀點(diǎn)(至少兩條)。[參考范文]Whatshouldagoodteacherbelike?Studentsandparentshavedifferentopinionsaboutwhatagoodteachershouldbelike.Asforstudents,theythinkgoodteachersshouldgetalongwellwiththeirstudents.Andtheyare,supposedtomaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting.However,parentsthinkdifferentlyfromstudents.Forthem,goodteachersshouldfirsthaveplentyofknowledge.Atthesametime,theyareexpectedtobestrictwiththeirstudents.Inmyopinion,themostimportantthingforagoodteacheristolovestudents.Theyshouldtrytoencouragestudentswhentheyhaveproblemswiththeirstudies.What??smore,theyshouldhelptheirstudentslearnhowtolearn.精彩語(yǔ)句thinkdifferently考慮不同atthesametime同時(shí)bestrictwithsb.對(duì)某人要求嚴(yán)格,◆51%practicespokenEnglish◆25%watchEnglishmovies◆18%readmoreclassics◆6%learnforeignculture,Writing16(2015寧波)最近,學(xué)校就空中俱樂(lè)部的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容設(shè)置做了意向調(diào)查(結(jié)果見下面圖表)。請(qǐng)你幫俱樂(lè)部用英語(yǔ)寫一篇報(bào)告,并談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕ɑ蚪ㄗh。,注意:(1)文中應(yīng)包含圖表所提供的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)想法和建議至少兩條;文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名;(3)詞數(shù):80—100(短文開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),考生可以選擇使用)。Recentlywe??vemadeasurveyofschoolskyEnglishclub.,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]1.本文主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):①介紹調(diào)查內(nèi)容;②陳述你的想法或建議,至少兩條。3.詞數(shù):80—100。參考詞匯:practicespokenEnglish,watchEnglishmovies,readmoreclassics,learnforeignculture[參考范文]Recentlywe??vemadeasurveyofschoolskyEnglishclub.Herearetheresults.Wefindthatfifty-onepercentofthestudentswanttopracticetheirspokenEnglishbyusingInternet.Twenty-fivepercentlikewatchingEnglishmovies,whichcanmaketheirholidaylifebetter.EighteenpercentwouldliketoreadmoreEnglishclassicsbecausetheyareinterestedinthem.Sixpercenthopethattheycanlearnmoreforeignculture,suchasgoodmannersandwesternfestivals.,AsfarasIknow,it??sveryhelpfultoimproveEnglishbylearningEnglishsongs.Maybewecanin-viteforeignerstointroducegoodwaystolearnsongs.I??msureallofuswillhavefunintheskyEnglishclub.精彩語(yǔ)句suchas例如beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣AsfarasIknow...據(jù)我所知……,Writing17(2014杭州)假設(shè)你是李平,最近你學(xué)習(xí)上遇到困惑。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nancy寫一封電子郵件,講述你的問(wèn)題并尋求她的幫助。注意:1.郵件必須包括下面三幅畫所描述的內(nèi)容;2.詞數(shù)80左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。參考詞匯:考試不及格failtheexam熬夜stayuplate,Love,LiPingHiNancy,Howareyou?Hopeyou??rewell.I??mreallylookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplysoon.,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]本篇是看圖作文。要求寫一封電子郵件。首先考生要對(duì)三幅圖中的三個(gè)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行描述,然后尋求對(duì)方的幫助。從第一幅圖中可知,圖片中的媽媽看到李平的考卷,非常生氣,要把她們的表情描寫出來(lái);第二幅圖是李平在熬夜學(xué)習(xí);第三幅圖李平上課時(shí)打瞌睡。通過(guò)分析可知本文主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài),因此要注意動(dòng)詞的形式,并要求表達(dá)流暢。[參考范文]HiNancy,Howareyou?Hopeyou??rewell.Ihaveaproblemandneedyourhelp.Ifailedthemathexamyes-terday.Mymomwasreallymadwithme.Inordertodobetternexttime,Istayeduplatelastnightdoingmymathhomework.SinceIdidn??tgetenoughsleep,Ifeltsleepythismorning.Myteachernoticedit.Shecameupandaskedwhatwaswrongwithme,butIdidn??ttellherthetruth.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?I??mreallylookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplysoon.Love,LiPing,Writing18(2014紹興)最近,你隨機(jī)調(diào)查了你校50名同學(xué)的課外英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)現(xiàn)狀(結(jié)果見下面圖表)。請(qǐng)你就此用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,在英語(yǔ)課上進(jìn)行匯報(bào),并談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。注意:1.文章必須包括圖表中四項(xiàng)內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);2.看法和建議至少兩條;3.文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),你只需接著寫;4.詞數(shù):80—100。參考詞匯:背誦recite,IhaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowstudentslearnEnglishoutofclass.,答案[寫作提示]1.本文屬于說(shuō)明、議論結(jié)合的文章,主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):①描述圖表內(nèi)容;②簡(jiǎn)述你的觀點(diǎn);③怎樣去做。3.參考詞匯:recite;practicedoing;chatwithsb.。[參考范文]IhaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowstudentslearnEnglishoutofclass.AlmostallstudentsreadandreciteEnglishwords.TheythinkvocabularyisthemostimportantforEnglishlearning.Morethan40studentsdoalotofwrittenexercises.Somestudentsgoovertheirnotestheyhavetakeninclass.However,onlyafewstudentsspendtimepracticinglisteningandspeaking.Inmyopinion,listeningandspeakingarethesecretsofbecomingagoodlanguagelearner.Weneedtodolotsoflisteningandspeakingpractice,suchaswatchingEnglishmoviesandlisteningtoEng-lishsongs.Also,chattingwithforeignerscanbehelpful.,Writing19(2014溫州)假如你是林思,要去澳大利亞的MelbourneHigh留學(xué),需要在當(dāng)?shù)卣乙粋€(gè)寄宿家庭(hostfami-ly)。請(qǐng)按要求寫一封約100詞的電子郵件給寄宿家庭中介公司的經(jīng)理Mr.Porter。內(nèi)容包括:(1)簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己的個(gè)人情況,如語(yǔ)言、愛好等;(2)提出自己對(duì)寄宿家庭的要求(如下表所示):,注意:郵件需涵蓋以上所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。DearMr.Porter,MynameisLinSi.,Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes,LinSi,答案[寫作要點(diǎn)]1.本文屬于記敘文,主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):①簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己的個(gè)人情況,如語(yǔ)言、愛好等;②提出自己對(duì)寄宿家庭的要求。3.參考詞匯:makefriends,beweakin,befondof...[參考范文]DearMr.Porter,MynameisLinSi.I??masixteen-year-oldboyfromChina.I??mgoingtostudyinMelbourneHigh.Ilikemakingfriends.Englishismyfavorites