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7步成文第六步打磨開頭和結(jié)尾，“與眾不同”把分添 近三年高考英語(yǔ)全國(guó)卷的書面表達(dá)以應(yīng)用文為主，一般要求寫一封書信，書信一般有自己專門的開頭格式。但固有的、模式化的開頭會(huì)讓閱卷老師多讀生厭、疲憊不堪，因此要想給閱卷老師留下好的第一印象，就得有一個(gè)引人入勝、新穎別致的開頭，這能夠激發(fā)閱卷老師的興趣，博得好感。有了一個(gè)好的開頭，若再加上一個(gè)畫龍點(diǎn)睛的結(jié)尾，那就真可謂錦上添花，無(wú)可挑剔了。“頭好一半文”“尾好更添韻”說(shuō)的就是開頭和結(jié)尾的重要性。 一、“四檔”“五檔”差在哪 [典例感悟]　(2017全國(guó)卷Ⅰ)假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括： 1．時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；　2.內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī)；　3.課前準(zhǔn)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 “冤屈的”四檔作文(得分17分) 升格后的五檔作文(得分23分) Dear Leslie， Ive decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours. Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditional literature and plays an important part in Chinese culture, so its necessary for you to have a good knowledge of it. Besides, in order to learn Tang poetry well, youd better get some information about Tang Dynasty before class. Looking forward to your earliest reply. Yours， Li Hua Dear Leslie， I am writing to tell you my plan for the ing Chinese lesson. Ive decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours. Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditional literature and plays an important part in Chinese culture, so its necessary for you to have a good knowledge of it. Besides, in order to learn Tang poetry well, youd better get some information about Tang Dynasty before class. Would you tell me if its convenient for you? Furthermore, when you meet with some puzzling questions, dont hesitate to turn to me. Yours， Li Hua 名 師 點(diǎn) 評(píng) 　　左欄的文章運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句、并列句結(jié)構(gòu)等，a symbol of, play an important part in, have a good knowledge of的應(yīng)用恰到好處，總體是一篇不錯(cuò)的作文。但美中不足的是缺少了文章開頭的點(diǎn)題和恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，不僅使得文章讀起來(lái)稍欠流暢，而且未達(dá)到詞數(shù)要求。右欄的作文加上開頭和改編了結(jié)尾使得文章總體上得到了升華，并且達(dá)到了詞數(shù)要求，從而上升了一個(gè)檔次，從四檔跨入了五檔。 二、如何由“四檔”升“五檔” (一)應(yīng)用文常見(jiàn)開頭段的寫法——開門見(jiàn)山 應(yīng)用文的特點(diǎn)是開門見(jiàn)山，用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言引出文章的主題，使讀者清楚文章要表達(dá)什么內(nèi)容，常用的開頭有： 求職信 Im writing to apply for the position of ... Learning from ..., Id like to apply for the post ... (2018浙江高考)Learning that our English Association needs some volunteers to meet the foreign students visiting our school, Id like to apply for the position. 咨詢信 Im writing to inquire/ask for some information about ... (2018衡水模擬)I am writing to ask for some information about the preparation of the English contest. 感謝信 Im writing to express my thanks for ... Id like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for ... (2018杭州模擬)From the bottom of my heart, I would like to convey my thanks to you for your service of high quality. 建議信 Im writing to express my view concerning .../to inform you of ... (2018全國(guó)卷Ⅰ)Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. 投訴信 Im writing to plain about ... (2018蕪湖模擬)I am Li Hua, a consumer from China. I am writing to plain about your poor service. 道歉信 Im writing to make an apology to you for ... (2018煙臺(tái)模擬)Im writing to make an apology to you for my being not able to attend the party. 邀請(qǐng)信 Im writing to invite you to ... Im writing to tell you that there will be a ... Would you like to ...？ (2018天津高考)I am writing to invite you to help us to take part in the World Adolescent Robotics petition to be held in Tianjin at the end of this July. 通知 May I have your attention, please? Recently, a/an ...will be＋過(guò)去分詞＋in ... In order to ..., all the students are wele to ... There is going to be a/an ...＋時(shí)間＋地點(diǎn) (2018全國(guó)卷Ⅱ)May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. (2018全國(guó)卷Ⅱ)In order to learn more about the development of our school, all the students are wele to watch the short film Growing Together, which is a documentary on the history of our school. (二)應(yīng)用文常見(jiàn)結(jié)尾段的寫法——表示期待 在應(yīng)用文的結(jié)尾處我們常使用一些功能句式，向?qū)Ψ奖硎居焉频母兄x或親切的問(wèn)候，表達(dá)愿望或期待等。常用的結(jié)尾有： 求職信 I would be grateful if you could consider my application/give me the chance. I hope to have the opportunity of an interview. (2018浙江高考)I would be grateful if you could give me the chance. 咨詢信 Im waiting for your early reply. (2018濟(jì)南模擬)I am waiting for your reply at your earliest convenience. 感謝信 I must thank you again for your generous help. Please accept my gratitude, now and always. (2018新鄉(xiāng)模擬)I must thank you again for your timely help. 建議信 In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. I hope you will find these suggestions practical. Ill appreciate you taking my suggestions into account. (2018全國(guó)卷Ⅰ)Hopefully, these suggestions would be of great help to you. I am looking forward to your good news. 投訴信 Id appreciate it if you ... as soon as possible. (2018萍鄉(xiāng)模擬)I would appreciate it if you could make up for the loss as soon as possible. 道歉信 Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience caused. I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies. (2018太原模擬)I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies. 邀請(qǐng)信 Im looking forward to your participation. (2018天津高考)Im looking forward to your joining my team. 通知 We hope that you would make it to our activity. We are looking forward to your warm participation. (2018全國(guó)卷Ⅱ)Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time then. [課堂應(yīng)用體驗(yàn)]　 翻譯下列開頭和結(jié)尾句 1．我代表學(xué)生會(huì)給您寫信請(qǐng)求幫助我們的校友。 I_am_writing_to_you,_on_behalf_of_the_Students_Union,_to_ask_for_help_for_our_schoolmate. 2．如果方便的話，我希望你能接受我們的邀請(qǐng)。 We_hope_that_you_will_accept_our_invitation_if_it_is_convenient_for_you. 3．我寫信申請(qǐng)?jiān)谀拇髮W(xué)里學(xué)習(xí)。 Im_writing_to_apply_to_study_in_your_university. 4．我寫信告訴您我的問(wèn)題，這個(gè)問(wèn)題困擾了我很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間。 I_am_writing_to_tell_you_my_problem,_which_has_troubled_me_for_a_long_time. 5．我寫信給你是因?yàn)槲矣行┐_實(shí)嚴(yán)肅的問(wèn)題想要和您交流。 I_am_writing_to_you_because_I_have_something_really_serious_to_municate_with_you. 6．7月25日至8月10日在北戴河將有一個(gè)英語(yǔ)暑假夏令營(yíng)。 There_is_going_to_be_an_English_summer_camp_in_Beidaihe_from_July_25_to_August_10. 7．我的確希望你能考慮我的建議。 I_do_hope_you_will_consider_my_suggestion. 8．對(duì)于您慷慨的幫助，我再次表示感謝。 Thanks_again_for_your_generous_help. 9．我為給你帶來(lái)這么大的麻煩再次向你道歉。 I_apologize_to_you_again_for_having_put_you_in_such_great_trouble. 10．我想向你致以最誠(chéng)摯的祝賀。 I_would_like_to_congratulate_you_with_all_my_heart. 11．如果你能認(rèn)真對(duì)待我的投訴，我會(huì)非常高興。 I_would_be_very_delighted_if_you_could_consider_my_plaint_seriously. 12．請(qǐng)一定按時(shí)參加。 Be_sure_to_attend_it_on_time.