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1、如何寫人物介紹如何寫人物介紹1.例文:假如你叫李明,你的美國朋友布魯斯開始學(xué)習(xí)中國文例文:假如你叫李明,你的美國朋友布魯斯開始學(xué)習(xí)中國文學(xué),來信詢問魯迅其人及作品。你回信介紹魯迅,內(nèi)容如下學(xué),來信詢問魯迅其人及作品。你回信介紹魯迅,內(nèi)容如下(1)魯迅,原名周樹人,浙江紹興人)魯迅,原名周樹人,浙江紹興人(2)為了國家,棄醫(yī)從文。)為了國家,棄醫(yī)從文。(3)著名的作家,思想家,而且還是中國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開創(chuàng)者。)著名的作家,思想家,而且還是中國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開創(chuàng)者。(4)小說被譯成多種文字,并被制成電影,如)小說被譯成多種文字,并被制成電影,如阿阿Q正傳正傳、祝福祝福這兩部影片。這兩部影片。(5)一些作
2、品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。)一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。參考詞匯:參考詞匯:阿阿Q正傳正傳:The True Story of AH Q 祝福祝福:The New Years Sacrifice注意:注意:1)介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,但不要逐條譯成英語。)介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,但不要逐條譯成英語。寫作要求寫作要求文章首尾已給出,不算字?jǐn)?shù)。文章首尾已給出,不算字?jǐn)?shù)。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性,信息內(nèi)容的完整性。句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性,信息內(nèi)容的完整性。Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literatu
3、re. Now let me tell you something about Luxun _Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will help you to know more about it.Yours, Li Ming審題的步驟是什么?審題的步驟是什么?文體文體主體時態(tài)主體時態(tài)人稱人稱信息點整合信息點整合( )教教育育:education ( )外外貌貌性格性格appearance ,character( )生生平平big events in his or her li
4、fe ( in order of time )( )評評估估evaluation( )概概況況age, sex, birth-place, background概概,貌貌,育育,平平,估估 1.A. 概況概況 :譯:鐘南山年出生在廣州,他是中國最偉大的醫(yī)生之一譯:鐘南山年出生在廣州,他是中國最偉大的醫(yī)生之一1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born
5、 in Guangzhou in 1941.B.外貌外貌,性格性格:譯:譯:我的歷史老師是個漂亮女人,她長著兩只大眼睛,留著長發(fā)我的歷史老師是個漂亮女人,她長著兩只大眼睛,留著長發(fā)* 語法,句法高分語法,句法高分tips盡量用分詞短語、同位語結(jié)構(gòu),使文章簡潔,通盡量用分詞短語、同位語結(jié)構(gòu),使文章簡潔,通順順 My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.巧用巧用with做定語做定語C. 教育經(jīng)歷:教育經(jīng)歷:1)Majoring in Science, he graduated from a fam
6、ous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies.2)Graduating from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree.D生平:生平:1)Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.2)He set
7、a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.注意盡量用非謂語動詞注意盡量用非謂語動詞, 使文章精煉使文章精煉盡量用復(fù)合句倒裝盡量用復(fù)合句倒裝,非限定定語從句等,潤色文章非限定定語從句等,潤色文章E評估:評估:1)Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him .2)He is one of the greatest novelists in China and wil
8、l be always remembered as an outstanding man.3)Lishizhen makes great contributions to Medical literature.注意運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞組注意運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞組Find out the good sentences in the possible version and remember them with your partnerDear Bruce,I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now
9、 let me tell you something about Luxun. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with real name Zhou Shuren abandoned the study of medicine because he thought he could change society more through writing. Not only was Lu Xun a well-Known Chinese writer, a thinker, and translator, but also the fat
10、her of modern Chinese literature. His novels have been translated into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice. Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks. Since you are learning Chinese
11、literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will benefit a lot. Yours,2.仿寫:假如你叫白云,從廣告上得知廣州某公司需要工程師。仿寫:假如你叫白云,從廣告上得知廣州某公司需要工程師。寫信應(yīng)聘。要求內(nèi)容包含如下要點。寫信應(yīng)聘。要求內(nèi)容包含如下要點。 (1) 姓名:白云,出生于廣州市越秀區(qū),年齡姓名:白云,出生于廣州市越秀區(qū),年齡27歲。歲。 (2) 2001年畢業(yè)于中山大學(xué),后來留學(xué)英國倫敦大學(xué)。年畢業(yè)于中山大學(xué),后來留學(xué)英國倫敦大學(xué)。 (3) 2005年數(shù)學(xué)方面成果顯著,獲博士學(xué)位。年數(shù)學(xué)方面成果顯著,獲博士學(xué)位。 (4)
12、英國一家公司想用高薪聘用他,但拒絕了。英國一家公司想用高薪聘用他,但拒絕了。(5) 為了報效祖國,于為了報效祖國,于2006年毅然回國。(年毅然回國。(6)有數(shù)學(xué)天賦。)有數(shù)學(xué)天賦。注意:注意:1)介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,但不要逐條譯成英語。文章)介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,但不要逐條譯成英語。文章首尾已經(jīng)給出,不算字?jǐn)?shù)。首尾已經(jīng)給出,不算字?jǐn)?shù)。寫作要求寫作要求評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性,信息內(nèi)容的完整性。句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性,信息內(nèi)容的完整性。牛刀小試牛刀小試;Now comes your tern!Dear Sir,How do you do? Through the ad .I kn
13、ow your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, BaiyunIm Bai Yun, born in Yuexiu Distr
14、ict, Guangzhou City, aged 27.After I graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001, I was sent to London University in the UK .Through hard work for 4 years, I achieved extraordinary achievement on maths because of my gift for maths and received a doctors degree. A British company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, but I refused it. To devote myself to our China, I came back this year without any hesitation in 2006. 注意注意“三寫三寫”,在規(guī)定的時間內(nèi)完,在規(guī)定的時間內(nèi)完成成