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1、第八講巧奪天工的連篇技巧第八講巧奪天工的連篇技巧李仕才有效地使用語句間的連接成分巧妙地銜接過渡，利用好“開篇、承接、轉(zhuǎn)折、總結(jié)”四個(gè)方法使文章流暢自然，是考生在書面表達(dá)題目上爭創(chuàng)高分的非常重要的條件。一、開篇?jiǎng)?chuàng)造良好開端1.常用表達(dá)“開篇”的過渡詞語(常用在段落或文章的開頭)first，first of all，at first，in the first place，firstly，to start with，recently，now，at present，in recent years，in general，generally speaking，at present，lately，curre
2、ntly等。2.常用表達(dá)“開篇”的句型(1)It is often said that.(2)As the proverb says.(3)It goes without saying that.(4)It is clear/obvious that.(5)Many people often ask.Firstly I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.(陜西卷)Its often said that all work without
3、play makes Jack a dull boy.As the proverb says，no pains，no gains.(北京卷)二、承接順勢(shì)承上又啟下1.常用表達(dá)“承接”的過渡詞語secondly，in addition，besides，moreover，what is more，what is worse，for example，in other words，especially，particularly，obviously，at the same time，no doubt meanwhile，as a consequence等。2.常用表達(dá)“承接”的句型：(1)It is t
4、rue that.(2)Everybody knows that.(3)It can be easily proved that.(4)No one can deny that.(5)The reason why.is that.(6)There is no doubt that.(7)To take.for example (instance).(8)What is more serious is that.In addition，I will go on a trip to Sichuan，where there are a great number of places of intere
5、st.Meanwhile，I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.三、轉(zhuǎn)折利用轉(zhuǎn)折巧過渡1.常用表達(dá)“轉(zhuǎn)折”的過渡詞語but，however，on the other hand，on the contrary，in any case，or，or else，
6、while，despite，in spite of，regardless of，instead等。2.常用表達(dá)“轉(zhuǎn)折”的句型(1)Every coin has two sides.(2)But for.I would never.(3)Another example is that.(4)Taking everything into consideration.(5)Thats why I feel that.There will be many challenges ahead，but I have confidence that Ill take on the burden.However
7、，it is not so easy for people to realize their dreams every time.四、總結(jié)完美結(jié)束全文常用表達(dá)“總結(jié)”的過渡詞語：in a word，in general，in short，above all，finally，in conclusion，at last，in summary，as a result，on the whole，in ones opinion等。1.Something must be done to.2.It can be safely concluded from.that.3.In my opinion，we ca
8、n draw the conclusion that.4.It may be summed up as follows.常用表達(dá)“總結(jié)”的句型：It may be briefly summed up as follows：its high time that our government took some measures to improve our environment.In my opinion，people need to learn to accept the reality and keep on trying.跟 蹤 訓(xùn) 練.完成句子1._ the Internet，comp
9、uters play an important role in peoples life.2._， the more you practise，the more skillfully you can write in English.3._，it is one of the oldest cities in the world.隨著因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，計(jì)算機(jī)在人們的生活中起著重要作用?？偟膩碚f，你練習(xí)越多，用英語寫作就越熟練。就拿北京來說吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。With the development ofGenerally speaking/On the whole/In generalT
10、ake Beijing for example4._，if you want to succeed，you have to believe in yourself.5._，I love wealth，but I value health more.6._，people shall not smoke in public places.7._，a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.也就是說，如果你想成功，必須相信自己。就我而言，我喜歡財(cái)富，但我更看重健康。按照我的觀點(diǎn)，人們不應(yīng)該在公共場(chǎng)所抽煙。總之，一個(gè)好市民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。Tha
11、t is to sayAs far as I am concernedIn my opinionIn a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief/To sum up8._， our class also organize a variety of activities to enrich our spare time.9._， if we spend too much time on phones，we will lose the communication skills we need in the future.另外，我們班還組織了各種各樣的活動(dòng)來豐富我們
12、的業(yè)余時(shí)間。更糟的是，如果我們?cè)陔娫捝匣ㄙM(fèi)過多的時(shí)間，我們會(huì)失去將來需要的交際技能。Besides/Whats more/In addition/Moreover/FurthermoreWorse still/To make matters worse.完成短文1._，I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. 2._ I wiped the dust off all the furniture.3._， I swept and moppe
13、d the floors.首先，我把所有的書籍、報(bào)紙和其他的散落在屋子里的東西收集起來放好，然后我掃去所有家具上的灰塵，之后我掃地、拖地。FirstlyThenAfter that.翻譯句子1.努力學(xué)習(xí)，你就會(huì)升入重點(diǎn)大學(xué)。2.游泳不但對(duì)身體有好處，而且能培養(yǎng)我們的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志。3.然而，使你最驚訝的是下述新的功能。4.相反，智能手機(jī)不僅占用我們寶貴的時(shí)間，而且對(duì)我們的健康造成極大的危害。_Work hard，and you will be admitted to a key university.Swimming not only benefits our health，but also hel
14、ps us have a strong will.However，what amazes you most is the following new function.On the contrary，smartphones not only take up our valuable time，but also do great harm to our health.5.多虧醫(yī)生的及時(shí)治療，他獲救了。6.因此，我建議應(yīng)該給我們更多的時(shí)間用于體育運(yùn)動(dòng)和睡眠。7.只要你不灰心，就一定會(huì)成功。8.如果我們忽視我們的未來，就像圖畫中的這個(gè)人一樣，我們就會(huì)以失敗告終。_Thanks to the doct
15、ors timely treatment，he was saved.Therefore，I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep.As long as you dont lose heart，youre sure to succeed.If we neglect our future，well end up in failure as what happens to the man in the picture.用方框內(nèi)的過渡詞完成下面的短文second，so，as a result，despite，on (the) one ha
16、nd，whats worse，instead of，in a word，on the other hand，as is well-known1._， online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. 2._， online shopping has many advantages.First，online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things.3._ searching a crowded store，we just need to watch the
17、computer screen and choose the things we like. 4._， it is much faster for us to do shopping.We dont have to spend a lot of time going to shops.Third，we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time.As is well-knownOn the one handInstead ofSecond5._，online shopping also has man
18、y disadvantages.The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are.6._， we can be cheated easily. 7._， we cannot see the things in detail.8._， 9._ the disadvantages of online shopping, I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.10._ we should develop it.On the other handAs a resultWhats worseIn a worddespiteSo
江蘇省高考英語 第三部分 寫作層級(jí)訓(xùn)練 第一步 循序漸進(jìn)提升寫作技能 第八講 巧奪天工的連篇技巧課件
